Friday, 18 March 2016

Hook Narrative

A sleeping volcano is known as a dormant volcano. One day there were 2 volcanoes one of them was a man the other person was a woman. They were both dormant.. 9.30 am the alarm was going loud and the volcano man turned it off same as the volcano lady they were erupting “Hello james” but she said it in a mean way “oh hello James!!!!” he starting laughing as hard as he can they were enemies but there names were James and Rose James was the mean one even if rose is nice to him he is always mean.Then one day they were against each other on a game the game was called lava tag.

We were learning about Hooking your audience.

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