We have been reading about Superbikes. This is my advertisement selling rides on a superbike that i researched.
This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College.
Wednesday, 27 May 2015
Super Bikes
We have been reading about Superbikes. This is my advertisement selling rides on a superbike that i researched.
Tuesday, 12 May 2015
Man in space
This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milky way. The astronaut bravely walks into the milky way portal to save a bunch of people before they die inside the milky way portal the portal and he noticed something that the milky way portal took him to another planet but it was a weird planet “it is weird here here” said the astronaut When he got through the portal he was looking for the survivors he was tired so had to have a
rest… Later he was not tired so was searching to save the people he was searching no one appeared then he notice that he was going in a circle then he saw a door he was too scared to go inside.When he opened the door silently there was only 1 person. That person told him everyone else is on the moon there the astronaut
took the survivor to save the people they noticed that the milky way portal was closing the astronaut and the
survivor was jumping so they can make then they made “YES! we made it” said the survivor so both of them was bouncing all the way to his ship so they can save the people “3 2 1 lets go” said the astronaut when they launched on the moon the astronaut were searching for everybody they were still searching. The astronaut was hungry and grumpy because he was very tired so he went inside his ship so can have a long sleep he
asked the survivor if he can look for them then he said yes to the astronaut then the astronaut was happy and excited to sleep. 3 hours later the astronaut waked up and the survivor looked very tired then both of them was searching for minutes then they looked then they found them “yes we finally found them i can’t wait until i eat Mcdonalds” so the people followed the astronaut to his space ship the people was so happy that the astronaut saved them then the all made it back to earth the end.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milky way. The astronaut bravely walks into the milky way portal to save a bunch of people before they die inside the milky way portal the portal and he noticed something that the milky way portal took him to another planet but it was a weird planet “it is weird here here” said the astronaut When he got through the portal he was looking for the survivors he was tired so had to have a
rest… Later he was not tired so was searching to save the people he was searching no one appeared then he notice that he was going in a circle then he saw a door he was too scared to go inside.When he opened the door silently there was only 1 person. That person told him everyone else is on the moon there the astronaut
took the survivor to save the people they noticed that the milky way portal was closing the astronaut and the
survivor was jumping so they can make then they made “YES! we made it” said the survivor so both of them was bouncing all the way to his ship so they can save the people “3 2 1 lets go” said the astronaut when they launched on the moon the astronaut were searching for everybody they were still searching. The astronaut was hungry and grumpy because he was very tired so he went inside his ship so can have a long sleep he
asked the survivor if he can look for them then he said yes to the astronaut then the astronaut was happy and excited to sleep. 3 hours later the astronaut waked up and the survivor looked very tired then both of them was searching for minutes then they looked then they found them “yes we finally found them i can’t wait until i eat Mcdonalds” so the people followed the astronaut to his space ship the people was so happy that the astronaut saved them then the all made it back to earth the end.
Wednesday, 6 May 2015
Thursday, 23 April 2015
Tuesday, 21 April 2015
Holiday highlights
On sunday morning I went down stairs my family was there when I looked outside there were heaps of easter eggs I WAS EXCITED! when my mum let me go me and my brothers went to look for some easter eggs there were heaps of easter eggs hidden.
Then I got two big easter eggs I went to look for some more then I found some little easter eggs.My little brothers was already eating but I still look for some more the was another big one under the flower I was lucky then keep and keep and keep on looking for some more big easter eggs then my brother finished eating then he went to look for some more easter eggs.
After that i was very hungry so I went inside then started eating one of the biggest egg I got it was DELICIOUS! then I started eating some more I had heaps of easter eggs 3 big eggs. and just 1 little egg I said to myself “I wish the had 100 big eggs” my favorite one was the biggest one then I went to look for only 1 more I was looking ages then only found 1 but it was not a big one it was littles ones but I didn't care I just went inside and ate it then i said to my brother “can I have some”? and he said yes.It was yum.
Then me and my little brothers went to watch televesion.My favorite part was when we went to look for some more the part that i did’nt like was the part when i got the little eggs and I hope i get heaps of big easter eggs next time when its easter .
Then I got two big easter eggs I went to look for some more then I found some little easter eggs.My little brothers was already eating but I still look for some more the was another big one under the flower I was lucky then keep and keep and keep on looking for some more big easter eggs then my brother finished eating then he went to look for some more easter eggs.
After that i was very hungry so I went inside then started eating one of the biggest egg I got it was DELICIOUS! then I started eating some more I had heaps of easter eggs 3 big eggs. and just 1 little egg I said to myself “I wish the had 100 big eggs” my favorite one was the biggest one then I went to look for only 1 more I was looking ages then only found 1 but it was not a big one it was littles ones but I didn't care I just went inside and ate it then i said to my brother “can I have some”? and he said yes.It was yum.
Then me and my little brothers went to watch televesion.My favorite part was when we went to look for some more the part that i did’nt like was the part when i got the little eggs and I hope i get heaps of big easter eggs next time when its easter .
Friday, 20 March 2015
Year 5 and 6 camp 2015
Last week I went to camp at school on Wednesday morning. It was amazing! I was in the Mata pono e group with Mrs Jacobsen. Our song for camp concert was Uptown Funk. That is my favorite song and were some more groups. There was the Commitments with Mr Somerville, The Honest Squad was with miss Lavakula,
the all stars with Mrs Vaafusuaga and the real deals with Mr Goodwin
First we did Rollerblading and Ping pong it was in the hall i did the rollerblading it was easy to ride then i played ping pong with lenard when i got bored i played basketball with simon after that we went to top town. But Mr Jacobsen calls it Killzone there were heaps of throwing water balloons and slingshot gumboot throw but i did not like that one after that we went to camp concert practice then we went to eat lunch
it was a pizza bread after we had lunch we went to camp cooking the boys was with Saffron but the girls went to make cookies me, christian and william was cooking buddies. Safron put some flour in to our bowl and heaps of milk i was the first one to steer then we all shared steering after that Safron put some corns in it then we
keeped on steering then i had a taste but it taste like flour then we cooked it miss told us to do our prayer first.When i finished i had a taste it was Delicious! then we tried some mussels i had only 1 when i tasted it it was little bit yuck! then we went
to watch the lego movie after that we went to go sleep in to our tent i wasn’t tired
so i stayed up for a little bit until i feel tired.My favorite part i enjoyed was the part when we went to kyayking and the part when we went to mangerne pool the part i did not injoyed was the kill zone and the amazing race and the one when we went cooking.I hope i can go to camp next year and i wish that camp never finished
cause i like camp
Kaitiaki of the Stream- Tuna Box
We have been reading a story called Kaitiaki of the Stream. It is about keeping the Kaitiaki clean .
This is my picture showing a contraption I designed to keep tuna fresh in the water until the family is ready to eat it.
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