tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6053611483387846738.post8155880711444091056..comments2023-03-26T21:30:14.097+13:00Comments on Jonathon: NarrativePES Blogs Admin 2014http://www.blogger.com/profile/15710822352595092146noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6053611483387846738.post-43985420843680992952016-03-08T08:37:09.992+13:002016-03-08T08:37:09.992+13:00Jonathon, you have a great first draft! I love th...Jonathon, you have a great first draft! I love that you took the picture and made your own creative story using the pictures as a starting point. I am so excited to see what you do as we work to make your story better!Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.com